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03 — Characters & Dialogue • 9 min read

Character Agency vs. Passive Protagonist Syndrome: The 5-Point Test

Diagnosing and curing reactive protagonists who are dragged along by plot convenience rather than driven by deliberate choice.

Scriptorium Editorial Board
Scriptorium Editorial Board
September 6, 2026

The Choice-and-Consequence Filter

A protagonist must not simply react to disasters; their active, flawed choices in pursuit of their desire must be the direct cause of the ensuing catastrophe.

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