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06 — Publishing & Authorship • 7 min read

The One-Sentence Hook: How to Condense an 80,000-Word Novel for Literary Agents

How to construct a query pitch paragraph that articulates Protagonist, Inciting Disruption, Central Choice, and Escalating Stakes in under 75 words.

Scriptorium Editorial Board
Scriptorium Editorial Board
July 6, 2026

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