The 6 Mandatory Scene Questions
- 1. What is the protagonist's clear goal entering the scene?
- 2. What immediate obstacle creates conflict?
- 3. What unexpected outcome alters the story state?
- 4. How does the emotional polarity shift (+ to - or - to +)?
- 5. What new causal decision does this force for the next scene?
- 6. If this scene were deleted, would the climax make complete sense?
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