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Show vs. Tell: An Algorithmic & Editorial Diagnostic Approach

"Show, don't tell" is the most quoted and most misunderstood advice in fiction. Here is when to show, when to tell, and how to balance both.

Scriptorium Editorial Board
Scriptorium Editorial Board
August 28, 2026

If you show everything, your novel will be 400,000 words long and crawl at a glacial pace. Telling is an indispensable tool for summary, transition, and pacing compression; showing is reserved for moments of dramatic confrontation.

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