The Anatomy of a High-Converting Query Letter
- Paragraph 1: The Hook & Protagonist Status Quo: Introducing the compelling dilemma in 2 sentences.
- Paragraph 2: The Inciting Catalyst & Escalating Stakes: What forces the character to act, and what catastrophe looms if they fail?
- Paragraph 3: Comp Titles & Author Bio: Two recent comp titles that prove market viability.
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