The Trap of the Past Perfect ('Had')
Backstory exposition frequently drowns in endless chains of 'had had' and 'had been'. Learn how to establish the past perfect anchor in a single introductory sentence and smoothly transition back to simple past without breaking grammatical integrity.
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